I like it, one thing that I think should be addressed in some of the touch-ups is in the first panel with the floating city blocks, there should be some sort of effect of the destructiion in the background, maybe some smoke or seeing some of the orbital weapon beams slaming down in the background. I see that effect in the second panel with the character running. all in all Loving having that need to see if a new page is up.
I like it, one thing that I think should be addressed in some of the touch-ups is in the first panel with the floating city blocks, there should be some sort of effect of the destructiion in the background, maybe some smoke or seeing some of the orbital weapon beams slaming down in the background. I see that effect in the second panel with the character running. all in all Loving having that need to see if a new page is up.